Sunnyday

I've read you characters and here are my comments: Each of them is detailed and intricate, having very unique descriptions and powers. You thought about those unique qualities very much. So here are the positive and negative things that may be considered: Positive: There's good variety, bizarre enough for the GG world and their personalities have potential for good interactions. Negative: Because your characters are so detailed, especially their fighting abilities, you're in the risk of putting too unnecessary elements in that story that readers may find to be "too much." What you need to do: You already made good characters, so you need to balance that out and focus on the story rather than the universe. Having too much emphasis on a certain element, example is the universe, will make it stand out and balance will be lost. So, that's it, balance your characters with a good story and a not too detailed story-telling. Hope I helped, danceljoy