I sound like a flaming homo on a mic. I'll use this to my advantage and try out for Jin.
Edit: There are a few grammatical errors/incorrect usage. Do you want us to read it how it's written, or read it grammatically correct? For example, on page six Jin says this.
"If you have any other business to bring to my attention...then you're dismissed, Lieutenant Vermillion." That does not make any sense, so I'm guessing it should be.
"If you don't have any other business to bring to my attention...then you're dismissed, Lieutenant Vermillion."
Which do I read it as?
Editx2: Oh dear god, I gave it my best shot. I hope to god I get picked :3.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=05VRGO5O Flaming Homosexual Jin.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=OBPS8Z2X Regular Voice Jin.