After I almost finished editing my stick art I called it a night and when I woke up next morning, I find that my portable harddrive which contained the psd image, decided to die so I had to start from scratch.
Anyways one Yash-critique later,
http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/568/vxsatemplatepreview1.png
I was also wondering if I should add a red outline effect to the crest like so,
http://img857.imageshack.us/img857/3315/vxsatemplatepreview2.png
Still open to more suggestions if any of you think this looks crappy in any way