I only watched the Jin and Lambda fights, but one big thing I noticed was you always do 6C after spark, which doesn't connect. Use 5C > whatever instead, you need to try and maximize damage when you actually land it. I have no idea what the jin was trying to do with his bursts and taunts, but atleast with the Lambda I noticed you constantly walked backwards, even in the corner. You need to instead think, "I'M TAGER BITCH" and just walk forward and punch her in the face. She was constantly in a position to get sledged but you just kept blocking/walking back and only really got damage because for whatever reason he went rushdown lambda and you kept getting 360s.