I just finished the Jin set. You have a lot of good confirms, especially on the TK Tsubaki>Hotaru.
This Jin was really disrespectful lol, so I feel like you got caught by a lot of things you should have waited for. Uh, that one OD you did at full health, I wouldn't really recommend it that much, you had the life lead and it was the first round, so there's no real risk or need for it I felt.
But yea, practice baiting those DP's, aside from the safe jump, you can also OS by holding 1A.