I should probably say this now ... personal opinions and stuff.
nothing too harsh, dont take this negatively, k?
urm,
the overall composition isnt very good...
because...Ragna and co are way too low in the canvas, and too small.
Saya is good but she seems more like a backdrop character instead of a 'foreground'
i cant see a solid /focus/ or theme
but only a 'mesh up of all the sketches i have'
a lot of things gets lost and your eyes gets too busy and....it doesn't work really well..
it would have been better if you started from center and spread out instead of.....leaving a giant blank in the middle and that gets pretty hard to fill up =3=..
andways, this is not art class and you are free to do whatever you want.XD
sooo have fun and post moer WIPs =D