Righty then, let's review some stuff:
TheGreatLeon19
Your remix of "Destructive Goodwill" is pretty freaking neat. The only things I can point out for constructive criticism are first of all how all of the sounds, except the percussion, is the same sampler/instrument. And while that helps it blend well, it some times meshes together a bit much and becomes pretty intelligible, like at the last part of the choruses. Aside from that, it sounds very much to me like most of it consists of basic MIDI-stuff, and while that is always a good place to start, I will always recommend finding new sounds to work with, while improving what you already have.
Laplace
Definitely an improvement. I'd say more, though Tsuki Garyuu has already covered all bases. So great work!