Guilty Gear Stories (spoilers abound!)

[NeoCriMs0n]

Really? Oh! Then just go ahead and read it before it got taken down, then.

[Blade]

One of these days I'll share my one GG Fanpr0n, but it's not all that great.

[ilikeusingdizzy]

should we create an 18 and up thread to post it in?

[Jam-Kiske]

If you do that expect me to write a lot of weird crap for my own amusement. I haz a Bleach fanpr0n somewhere... I blame the boringness of European History for that though...

[danceljoy]

What is a fanpr0n? @Neocrimson I wasn't able to finish my review because I accidentally sent it. So I'll post it here for you and for other fanfiction writers as well. ... But my dear friend, your script format is against the rules of ff.net, please revise it once you find the mood. And other grammatical errors include unnecessary capitalizations of "Boxing Character,""Stupid Joy… Stick," "Ky wiggled his Controller,""pressing Random Buttons," etc(Unless you have innuendos... which I doubt you would have for Ky and Sin.) And personally, I mean personally, KyxDizzy scenes may be obligatory for you, but avoid writing them just for the sake of it. Each scene must be coherent with the theme. May I just inform you that, I'm no prof or teacher, or writing club president but just a top tier in English Class so I'm not a professional to give you the best critique,

[NeoCriMs0n]

I'm sorry! That Fanfic is rushed. I'm gonna revise it when I have the time. I guess I'm not REALLY good at Father and Son, moments. I might avoid that from now on. I hope nobody's mad. Please, forgive me!

[NeoCriMs0n]

I managed to revise my current GG Fanfic!

I got rid of some of the unnecessary capitalizations.

And I got rid of the forbidden scripting.

And per Dancel-chan's request, I got rid of the KyXDizzy sweet scenes and made it only interactions.

Here it is: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5345439/1/Desperate_for_the_WIN

Thank you so much! And give me reviews, okay? Much loves!!

@Dancel-chan

Thank you so much for spotting the errors on my current Fanfic!

And I'm really sorry if you find that Fanfic weird.

Ky is a little bit OOC there, but it is all for the sake of humor.

Hehehe...

I hope I can still count on your support on my upcoming GG Fanfics.

I'm currently planning to write another one, and I'm gonna make it a crossover.

But, I'm wondering if I should cross it with Fate Stay Night or BlazBlue.

Oh, well...

Thank you again, Dancel-chan!!

Peace!

[danceljoy]

I guess I'm not REALLY good at Father and Son, moments.

And I'm really sorry if you find that Fanfic weird.

Ky is a little bit OOC there, but it is all for the sake of humor.

Hehehe...

I praised your sweet father and son fics didn't I? Why do you need to apologize? OOC-ness isn't that bad as long as you're able to handle it with appropriateness and creativity- I'm sure you were able to. It's a nice thing to use Ky's losing streaks as a joke knowing that he always lose to Sol., and Ky being depressed at a videogame is actually funny. Sin is indeed disrespectful to his father and he acted just the way he is.

And don't say that "I'm not REALLY good." You're just learning, you were even a hell lot better than me than my first fanfics. Now I find it hard not to puke whenever I read my old Code Geass fanfics, and no matter how tragic "Fragments of Hope" is, I'll definitely revise it one of these days because it needs a lot of improvement.

I'm sorry!

That Fanfic is rushed.

No excuses in ff.net, before you submit a story you "accept the guidelines" right?

I got rid of some of the unnecessary capitalizations.

And I got rid of the forbidden scripting.

Yeah, I saw that. But there's still a lot of errors. No pressure my friend, revise it once you find the time.

Hope I didn't sound too harsh. This is just my idea of helping a friend out

P.S And to Zazz, and Lou: Have you read my SolxAria M-rated fic? Because I may delete it one of these days; that fic is a bastard child that I want to throw away.

[Jam-Kiske]

dancel you're excellent and throwing out advice. And Neocrimson [too lazy for the funky capitalization] I promise I'll read it myself at some point... it's just that all the homework in college consists of reading and it takes up all of my time. ;.; Though I'm sure your humor is less random than some of the things I've written... Geez... my 13 year old self back when all I did was write fics... reading that stuff is hilarious in a not so good way.

[~Avant~]

A thought occured to me, but before putting it out their, has their ever been any interactions between Axl and Bridget?

[Shadow Draygon]

A thought occured to me, but before putting it out their, has their ever been any interactions between Axl and Bridget?

[Sunnyday]

lol lol

[danceljoy]

A thought occured to me, but before putting it out their, has their ever been any interactions between Axl and Bridget?

What I know is that they have a special opening, something like Axl hitting on Bridget.

dancel you're excellent and throwing out advice.

Well all I can reply to that is that I LOVE giving out advice that I think that can help. But I myself need, no, begging for advice regarding my GG fanfics. It's difficult for me to improve if my only critic is myself.

(newest up, oldest down)

M-rated SolxAria fic- I want to delete that one of these days

My short, mature KyxDizzy :Need in-depth analysis

My cute, fangirly complicated story about Ky being transported into another dimension:Hmmm will be updated if I pass my math

Dizzy-centric KyxDizzy fic, very angsty: Need in-depth analysis

The KyxDizzy fanfic I remember everyday (cause it rains a lot here) Comments would do

A silly story about Ky,Sin and Sol and a library:This is fine...

How Ky dies, very tragic:In my current writing standards it's...cheesy, I'll revise it at my sem break.

But since your penname is Jam-Kiske...are you a KyxJam shipper? Well, if you're not very comfortable in reading my fics then please don't oblige yourself

... it's just that all the homework in college consists of reading and it takes up all of my time. ;.;

Yeah college homework kills, though in my case its my math subject that kills me. Gosh I suck at math, if life is easier here I would just have taken courses in theater arts or classical piano or operatic singing...

Other fanfiction ideas others may adapt.

1. What can happen if Chipp, Bang and Naruto meet together?

2. What will Chipp and Bandit Keith say to each other?

3. What if: Sol vs Guts, and Ky vs Griffith? Easy: Griffith dies, no exception

4. What will happen if Sousuke Sagara and Ky Kiske meet?

5. WWHI Baiken meets Kenshin?

6. WWHI Ky Kiske enters the Ouran Host Club?

7. WWHI Dizzy enters magical shoujo anime/manga?

Darn it, so many ideas, no time to write...

[Lou_Cypher]

Other fanfiction ideas others may adapt.

1. What can happen if Chipp, Bang and Naruto meet together?

2. What will Chipp and Bandit Keith say to each other?

3. What if: Sol vs Guts, and Ky vs Griffith? Easy: Griffith dies, no exception

4. What will happen if Sousuke Sagara and Ky Kiske meet?

5. WWHI Baiken meets Kenshin?

6. WWHI Ky Kiske enters the Ouran Host Club?

7. WWHI Dizzy enters magical shoujo anime/manga?

Darn it, so many ideas, no time to write...

1. Three-way fusion into one super ninja.

2. One's an American who is a Japanese wannabe. One's a Canadian who pretends to be American. Hmm...

3. Wouldn't it be more: Sol, Ky, and Guts vs. Griffith?

4. Skipping this.

5. Love.

6. A mix of Kyouya and Tamaki that everyone will love.

7. Give her Zelretch's Kaleidostick.

[danceljoy]

1. Three-way fusion into one super ninja.

2. One's an American who is a Japanese wannabe. One's a Canadian who pretends to be American. Hmm...

3. Wouldn't it be more: Sol, Ky, and Guts vs. Griffith?

4. Skipping this.

5. Love.

6. A mix of Kyouya and Tamaki that everyone will love.

7. Give her Zelretch's Kaleidostick.

1. Then if Jiraiya meets Johnny and the Jellyfish...

2. I guess Bandit Keith will bash Chipp and teach him on to be American...in America.

3. Nevertheless, Griffith dies

4. No idea yet...

5. A nice fight ensues, followed by Kenshin's preaching about peace....

6. Tamaki and Kyouya would feel threatened by the new bishie capturing every girl's heart

7. Actually what I had in mind is Dizzy losing control and ends up killing Sailormoon and her pals

Lou, how's your fics going?

[Lou_Cypher]

Lou, how's your fics going?

Slight slump right now. If only because I'm working on three fics. Guilty Gear/Kingdom Hearts, Blazblue/Kingdom Hearts, and Tales of Vesperia/Blazblue.

Pairings there as of now would be Ky/Larxene, Jin/Larxene, and Jin/Estelle (Post-normal ending and not true ending and no Rachel funny business.)

[~Avant~]

Other fanfiction ideas others may adapt.

1. What can happen if Chipp, Bang and Naruto meet together?

2. What will Chipp and Bandit Keith say to each other?

3. What if: Sol vs Guts, and Ky vs Griffith? Easy: Griffith dies, no exception

4. What will happen if Sousuke Sagara and Ky Kiske meet?

5. WWHI Baiken meets Kenshin?

6. WWHI Ky Kiske enters the Ouran Host Club?

7. WWHI Dizzy enters magical shoujo anime/manga?

Darn it, so many ideas, no time to write...

1. Naruto sucks (constantly crying over Sasuke), Chipp and Bang would show him true manliness.

2. Coke is bad

3. Guts vs. Sol would be badass, but Sol would kill him nearly instantly. Guts is peak human or above at best, Sol is easily hypersonic and has great durability, easy win. Ky better kill Griffith if he knows whats good for him.

4. Not much

5. Kenshin makes her his bitch

6. Lot of hilaroty

7. Negima ftw

[Jam-Kiske]

But since your penname is Jam-Kiske...are you a KyxJam shipper? Well, if you're not very comfortable in reading my fics then please don't oblige yourself

Nah. It stems more from the fact that I'm a Ky fangirl and have a personality somewhat like Jam's.... >>;

I'd love to read your stuff whenever I find the time. @.@

Yeah college homework kills, though in my case its my math subject that kills me. Gosh I suck at math, if life is easier here I would just have taken courses in theater arts or classical piano or operatic singing...

I stuck myself in 2 choirs and a band in addition to my classes.

Other fanfiction ideas others may adapt.

1. What can happen if Chipp, Bang and Naruto meet together?

2. What will Chipp and Bandit Keith say to each other?

3. What if: Sol vs Guts, and Ky vs Griffith? Easy: Griffith dies, no exception

4. What will happen if Sousuke Sagara and Ky Kiske meet?

5. WWHI Baiken meets Kenshin?

6. WWHI Ky Kiske enters the Ouran Host Club?

7. WWHI Dizzy enters magical shoujo anime/manga?

1. I saw a BB/Naruto crossover on ff.net... though I can't remember what the summary said.

2. O.o So much... treason!

3. ...

4. Ummmmmmm

5. BADASSERY. I'd probably just jizz at remember my childhood and days of writing shit tons of Rurouni Kenshin fanfiction... >>

6. I lold irl at this idea... Oh the temptation to throw together something ridiculous. I'd have a new favorite Host that's for sure... xD

7. O.o Hmmm.... mmmm.... Dizzy.

[Ky/Jam/Dizzy]

u know what? pardon me, but i see lots of Sol/Ky and Jin/Ragna and me no like. i wish some peeps would do Ky/Dizzy and Ky/Jam and other straight Ky doujins, and same for Jin. the yaoi is overflowing! i like Jin/Noel and Jin/Makoto, but any straight pairings of either of the 2 would be great (ps, if peeps actually do take my advice, remember that most of these girls should be virgins! so many times in doujins the girls r not, and i find them usually wrong!) *fingers crossed* :P *tongue out in concentration*

[Jam-Kiske]

Have you looked at this thread? I honestly don't think anyone has put up yaoi here recently. YOU FAIL.

[NeoCriMs0n]

u know what? pardon me, but i see lots of Sol/Ky and Jin/Ragna and me no like. i wish some peeps would do Ky/Dizzy and Ky/Jam and other straight Ky doujins, and same for Jin. the yaoi is overflowing! i like Jin/Noel and Jin/Makoto, but any straight pairings of either of the 2 would be great (ps, if peeps actually do take my advice, remember that most of these girls should be virgins! so many times in doujins the girls r not, and i find them usually wrong!) *fingers crossed* :P *tongue out in concentration*

There's nothing we can do about it, since Yaoi Fangirls are more overflowing.

You see, many Fangirls love Ky/Jin, which is not good. I already noticed that there are actually only about two Ky X Girl Doujinshi I have seen, so far. Many of Ky's Doujinshi ALWAYS ends up with him getting raped by countless big men or GG boys. The same with Dizzy, which ends up with her also getting raped. That also pisses me off.

Since, I am NOT a Dizzy Fanboy!

I am a Certified Ky Kiske and Jin Kisaragi Fanboy!

The conclusion is, many IMMATURE Boys hate Ky, they think he is Gay, just because he is nice. Actually, Ky received a lot of HATE from KyXSol Fangirls and Dizzy Fanboys when they heard the news that Ky is now together with Dizzy.

Here's a couple of reasons why:

1.) Ky is a Christian Knight

2.) He is VERY kind and chivalrous

3.) He is Innocent

4.) VERY DEVOTED to Justice

5.) Ky wouldn't make a move on any Girl (Until the time when Dizzy came to live with him in Accent Core Plus, and umm... IT happened... You know what I mean.)

6.) He doesn't curse

7.) He enjoys reading and collecting teacups

8.) He enjoys peaceful times

As you have noticed, Dizzy also has the same attitudes as Ky. That's why I'm SO glad that Daisuke made Ky with Dizzy together. Since, both are the most kind and innocent characters in GG history! Also:

:KY: = Hottest Boy in GG History!

= Prettiest Girl in GG History!

And a couple of reasons why he is always paired with Sol:

1.) Typical Yaoi Fangirls/Fanboys (I don't think I need to explain this one.)

2.) He is obsessed in defeating Sol, and always in his way. Thus, leading one to speculate that he is obsessed with him

3.) There is a scene in a Drama CD where Sol is crying over Ky's dead body

4.) Opposite Personality Attraction (Much like Sasuke and Naruto)

5.) The two are almost always fated to meet and fight one another

6.) There can never be a Guilty Gear without Ky or Sol

Well, those are the reasons I can think of.

And about Jin.

Here's a couple of reasons why there are a LOT of JinXRagna:

1.) In the past, Jin looks up to Ragna, and he is jealous of his sister Saya. One can only speculate that Jin is NOT inlove with Ragna, it's just somewhat like a Father-Son relationship, with the Son longing for the Father's attention. But, the Father cares for the Daughter more than the Son. Thus, the Son is jealous of his Sister.

2.) Yaoi Fangirls/Fanboys use THAT exact same relationship for their JinXRagna Yaoi stuff

3.) Just like Ky with Sol, Jin is always in Ragna's way

4.) Jin Kisaragi is the Ky Kiske of BlazBlue. Thus, anyone can expect the same treatment to him as Ky did in Guilty Gear.

5.) There can never be a BlazBlue without Jin or Ragna

"You all get the wrong idea! I am NOT inlove with Ragna!"

"YYYAAAAYYYY!!!"

Okay, that was weird.

Well anyways, I guess that's it.

Those are the reasons I can think of.

Whew!

And I kinda agree with you.

Straight Couples are the BEST Couples!

Oh! And by the way, I see that you are using one of my KyXDizzy Artworks in DeviantArt as your Avatar Picture? Thank you so much for that!

Hope I managed to help answer your question.

[caeli]

Ow, my head.

4.) Jin Kisaragi is the Ky Kiske of BlazBlue. Thus, anyone can expect the same treatment to him as Ky did in Guilty Gear.

Because Ky is a jerk who would totally torture a little boy to death, treat his subordinate (and just about everyone else) like dirt, and then kill her because of her resemblance to his little sister

Straight Couples are the BEST Couples!

Because gender determines the worth of a relationship. God forbid someone have different preferences from yours.

[Shadow Draygon]

Fanboys defy all logic caeli, heheh.

I don't like the whole super saint thing for character development, it's just way two-dimensional; same with villains who are evil for the sake of being evil. Everyone has a good and a bad side to them and it's the moral choices they make in life that defines them as a character. True you can have high outstanding morals but usually by making some bad mistakes in life or giving into some sort of temptation is what makes you human.

Also...

The same with Dizzy, which ends up with her also getting raped. That also pisses me off.

I dunno man, I think all the doujins with Dizzy getting the short end of the stick are hilarious.

The way she's dressed doesn't really help either.

: Hello, I'm ever so naive and bashful and will probably cry at the slightest bit of pressure or drama.

Now please keep in mind that the producers are Japanese, that's like, a fetish to them. So naturally she's on the rape train.

[Chainsaw Guitar]

The conclusion is, many IMMATURE Boys hate Ky, they think he is Gay, just because he is nice.

That was a brilliant analysis. That totally explains why those immature boys also think Testament is gay. He is just too kind to the human race!~

[danceljoy]

There's nothing we can do about it, since Yaoi Fangirls are more overflowing.

The conclusion is, many IMMATURE Boys hate Ky, they think he is Gay, just because he is nice. Actually, Ky received a lot of HATE from KyXSol Fangirls and Dizzy Fanboys when they heard the news that Ky is now together with Dizzy.

And I kinda agree with you.

Straight Couples are the BEST Couples!

I'm sad. I'm sorry to break this to you but this thread isn't supposed to be like this... I'm partially guilty for making this comment but I think there are flaws in your reasoning.

1. Never say that Jin is the Ky Kiske of Blazblue. Please. You're stereotyping blond characters and you're emphasizing their roles as rivals instead of their true character.

2. Ky curses sometimes "Shimmatta!"

3. I know we both strongly prefer straight couples but a pairing based on gender alone can be shallow. I'm forever biased to straight pairings but Sol/Ky has has many foundations, much more than KyxDizzy if you look in a gender-sensitive perspective.

4. And I know mature boys who hate Ky not because he's gay but because of preference.

Peace my friend, I'm just being honest. Please don't be angry at me *puppy eyes*

These following paragraphs are not targeted to specific individuals:

KyxDizzy is a controversial couple, until now. That's what makes it interesting and hated at the same time. And that's why I like it, it's pure shock and WTF-ness, a double edged sword. And because it's so shocking that many fans loved it, and many hated it for f-cking up the storyline. Also, KyxDizzy has been received quietly at first because Overture is 360 and in 3D, AND it was based on clues such as the "Lady of the Bower, reproduction of Justice, etc." Yet its fandom has been continuously growing as more people become aware of it.

I don't like the whole super saint thing for character development, it's just way two-dimensional; same with villains who are evil for the sake of being evil. Everyone has a good and a bad side to them and it's the moral choices they make in life that defines them as a character. True you can have high outstanding morals but usually by making some bad mistakes in life or giving into some sort of temptation is what makes you human.

Totally agree.

Aside from sinking SolxDizzy, BridgetxDizzy, TestamentxDizzy, KyxJam, KyxMillia etc, the existence of Sin is pure madness. Which is good for me and makes me obsessed with it KyxDizzy is crap OR the best(which is my pick) because it's a very twisted knight and princess story. They are picture perfect and as Neo said, both are innocent and kindhearted. They make a sinfully cute couple, so perfect for each other like a fairy-tale yet very much forbidden given the social, political and biological circumstances.

Sol/Ky is an obvious target for Yaoi, and will never be sunk. FOIL *cough* Sol is so manly, anti-social and rough while Ky is refined, young yet obsessed with Sol. Personality wise they fit. Appearance wise, they're hot. But the crucial foundation of Sol/Ky is their development in the GG games. Since the start, it has always been them, clashing and affecting each other's lives. The greater impact would be on Ky, who was naive and stubborn, yet Sol "playing along with the kid" is...touching.

Fangirls are fangirls. Fanboys are fanboys. But not all fangirls/boys are just interested in sexy yaoi/yuri scenes; fangirls/boys mature and I know a lot of fangirls who has a deep understanding of Sol and Ky's relationship. They found it beautiful. Those fangirls scan countless GG materials, draw tons of fanarts, translate supplementary stories and infos and has been active in this community long before I joined it. They have my utmost respect.

Again, I loathe Yaoi from the bottom of my heart, but there are fans that deserve respect. For their sake, I'm careful of what I say.