@SovietBear: Stop using Shippu so much, especially full screen, you're only succeeding in wasting meter that could be used for better things. Once in a while, sure but not all of the time. Also, you're mashing a lot on wake up hence why you keep getting Counter Hit so much; try to think about what the opponent will try to catch you with as you wake up and act appropriately, worst case scenario you just have to block.
Also, and because I do this a lot myself, don't use 3C as such a close range because it's really punishable there. If you must try to space out the opponent as much as possible before ending pressure with 3C so you're still safe enough to block afterward.
@entnervt: I'd work on your offense some more, there were a lot of points when you backed off and gave up whatever advantage you have, Bullet can't do much when you're on top of her and while Hakumen's pressure isn't exactly...great, they're bound to crack eventually. Try things like tick throws, Hop Tsubaki, Renka(1)>Kishuu etc. when you're attacking.