Since no one has commented, I'll give you some feedback.
Aside from some character-specifics, this was basically a FC cmv with couple of variations thrown here and there. Some of them also have room for improvement.
Now, I'm not saying the best cmvs are the ones that feature the most damaging combos but, it feels like yours didn't take any particular direction.
Not your fault though, it's just that the whole forum knows about all combo routes and expect to see something new and exciting.