Hmm...thanks. I can kinda get it a little better now, trying to focus on hitting that low j.K.
EDIT: Wow, I tried doing your version, and I can do it a LOT more efficiently.
My air combo was: blah blah > 5H j.H j.K dj j.K j.D j.2K j.K 5H
I guess there's a lot more room to mess up. Thanks a bunch!